the kingdom of shadowsin the beginning there was nothing. the world was plain and young but the plant's grew. after some time two being's known as adam and eve came into the world and with them came light. and with light came darkness and brought a whole other world. this other world was not completely dark for where to light's and under those light's where he being clarik and anna the king and queen of shadow's. they where the shadows of adam and eve and adam and eve where their light. they at the time did not know of the other world existence and the only thing they did know of was fear for they where terrified of the darkness that surround's them and the only t
A fine story indeed, however you do have some mistakes. First off the names and sentence begginings should be capitalized.When the newly created shadows cheered for their creators they "started to "LONG LIVE THE KING..." started to what? An option would be "started to chant" or "started to cheer" or simply "started to say". You also might want to tell why exactly the lights were going out, I assumed it was when Adam and Eve were dying but you might have told the reader just in case they don't get it. In conclusion I think your story is excellent and very original there are just some minor errors that's all.